|Reviews for Broken Promise|
| Tomorrow's Memories chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
I think with a little editing this will be a great song. The chorus is amazing, and I have a soft spot for songs that start with a chorus.
| eaststar chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
A chorus is supposed to be more catchy than the rest of the lines. Maybe you should have done something more simple for it. Plus, I dislike how you repeated it so much. But the other lines are beautiful.