Reviews for Cloak and Dagger
art monkey chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
I'm speculating here about why she's bleeding. Here's my theory. Her and Michael had sex, but there was nothing said about him using protection. So it could have been possible that she got pregnant the last time they did it. The blood could be from her having a miscarrage. It is a logical conclusion since she made sure to bring her own refreshments so that there wouldn't be anything mysterious put into her drink. Hmm...could this be it? I guess I'll have to wait to find out so please update again soon. I've loved reading your story.
citrises chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
Excellent chapters really well written. I can't wait for the next hope it's emotional ;)
Leela chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
Omg. She's pregnant, isn't she?

That's why she never had her period? No? Yes?

In any case, you kick ass.
CynicalRomantic09 chapter 3 . 12/14/2009
Oh my.

I had forgotten how defiant Christina was with Michael in the beginning. I decided to go back and re-read from the beginning and I love it. It just amuses me that someone that was as obviously terrified as she was that she still managed to call him things like 'pathetic' and 'a worm'. Not the best insult in the world, but for her it works. Lol.
Nono chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
OMG, its definetly not over yet.

I can't leave a long review BUT zomg quick update and LOVED it!

xDoubleU chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
Gahh, I missed a whole chapter! D:

Maybe I should skip studying and just read the stories.. hm..

Anyways, I was close to Michaels age! xD I thought he was 24, I don't know what made me think that but maybe it was his being 'Edward' identity, not sure..

And, I can't believe the next chapter to this amazing story is the end.. Unless of course there's a sequel *winkwinknudgenudge* ;D But I'll still like the story with or without the sequel :P

I wonder what Michael will think about this.. o:

I can't believe the story is going to end.. I can't, I can't, I can't.

"Hello, Michael." XD

Aww, and he gave up everything for her!~

Can't wait for the ( LAST D': ) chapter! xD
todrownandburn chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
Grr cliffhanger!

Can't wait for more Michael :P

Please update soon.

Love Drown.
malak.afra chapter 1 . 12/14/2009

Your story its absolutely great . Its sad that Christina and michael cant be together . I just wish that the story has a happy ending .
sally n chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
hey! i love ur story! ive read a few of these kinds of stories yet yours was the best hands down. look what i would like to ask of u is to please do a sequal or end it happily! these characters have been through so much they deserve a happy ending and if i had seen this story sooner i would have supported u throught no doubt about it..u write brilliantly and youre dtailed u nailed it!

happy holidays!
FlorVerde chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
Again, wow. I am in awe with your talent for writing. This sotry is absolutely amzing and I adore both Christina and Michael. And yes I am waxing poetic on your story, but honestly, it's one of my all time favourites. You've got a knack for dragging people in and making them see things through the lenses you've created here, and it makes the entire thing that much more amazing. Plus it's my first het (I was more of a slash reader before) so it's got some sentimental value too lol ;)

Anyways, I really hope you'll make a sequel! I completely agree with you about how they can't be together right now because neither is mature enough. Christina's still a kid (with some very heavy added baggage) and Michael's got the emotional maturity of a starved 2 year old. But well, with all the shit they've been through, I feel like they deserve happiness. And, me being the romance addict that I am, I'm hoping they'll find it with each other (eventually) :p And holy fuck she was pregnant? I definitely was not expecting that! (well you had me guessing the whole way through so thats nothing new but still!) can't wait for the final part of the epilogue!

Thanks for posting this amazing fic and please, please write a sequel? : )
CynicalRomantic09 chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
Yay for splitting the epilogue up! Gives us more time to savor the final moments of the story. Lol.

And this was great! I loved that you brought The Sniper back for this. Their conversation was a little amusing. I don't know why, but for some reason, I like the guy. I much prefer scenes with him and his weird sense of humor than with Adrian Callahan.

It's kind of sad with what happened to Christina. She's completely changed now and she can't even talk to anyone about it. I would have been so pissed off if my closest friend said what Rene had about it being time to move past it. I mean, it's true in a sense. You can't hold onto the past forever, but then again, she didn't experience what Christina did.

And what on earth is wrong with the girl? And will Michael show up or was the last chapter the last interaction he'll have with Christina until your sequel, which, by the way, I was completely excited to hear about! A sequel would be awesome. Michael is probably one of my favorite characters on this site.
Lesumi chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
Is she going to bleed to death?
appletushie chapter 30 . 12/14/2009
She's pregnant! Hope the baby will be okay. Michael got to come out of his hiding and save Chris and their child now.

Loving this chapter, reading between the lines it's obvious they both still pining for each other and it's sad that they tried to get on with their lives but failed miserably. And Chris is such a hot commodity since Michael watching her from one side and the sniper watching her from the other, to make sure that Michael toed the line!

I don't mind you prolonging the chapter though as long as the two of them end up together and have their happy ending.
Scars.forever.Scarlet chapter 30 . 12/14/2009

Did she just have a miscarriage?

Quixoticisms chapter 30 . 12/14/2009

Even though I'm the type of reader who wouldn't be satisfied unless the guy gets the girl (and the girl, the guy) I kind of like the fact that you're prolonging the getting together part-I foresee a more-than-satisfactory ending 8) (As opposed to something anti-climatic and blah)

I can't wait!
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