Thanks for the thanks! lol Oh man, I'm totally hooked. This is AMAZING, I love how real the characters are already. Nine Inch Nails rock!

This is a rewrite yes? I like it. If it is what I think it is, then I do believe it's starting out better than last time. :D

Yay yay yay! I am so glad that you reposted/rewrote Jaded. That was my favorite story on FP. I really am so excited! I'm pretty much jumping over here lol.

Anyways, this is off to a great start! Horrorscape was a great story, but I understand why you took it off.

Gotta say I love crime stories, and this sounds promising and even though I was confused at first, I was kinda hooked by the end xD

I couldn't get around to finishing Horrorscape, which was amazing btw, so hopefully I'll get around to finish reading this one xD (The sentence sounds kind of off, doesn't it?)

I really want to know how Christina'll react to knowing that a secret organization's after her ;P Excited? Scared? Or both? xD

Update soon, when you can x] (I'm not pushing you! xD)

P.S. I love your writing ;D

P.P.S. Sorry for the lovely amount of faces, let's use the excuse that it's currently 1:03 AM where I'm from ;D

Amazing writing and the whole plot is quite interesting. This chapter really hooked me in, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Really great like always, Candid. I'm REALLY excited to read the next chapter, please post soon!