|Reviews for Pyromania|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I think you should make a collection called Mentality and then make each piece a different chapter. That wouold work better if you want it read as a series.
"The sound of a match striking is Ecstasy to my ears."... I don't get why you'd capitalize the E
"The pain I fell when the heat strays to close to my delicate milky-white skin gets me off."... feel
"No one know about my obsession with fire."... knows
"But you can't take the girl away from the fire"... but
"pain in it's wake."... its
I thought the piece was interesting. The idea of describing a pyromaniac is an cool one. I also like the part about it being a need. That's really true.
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