|Reviews for Daylight|
| Floating Apple chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Wow, that was wonderful. I loved the twisty bit at the end. The sentence you put just before it - As long as men like him live, life can’t be all bad. - makes it doubly good. The ending was very strong, with a great message. I can see why you got a 98! Great story :)
| kynthiaphellan chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Despite the few typos, this is a pretty good story.