Reviews for FIN
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
I absolutely LOVE the style you wrote this one in! Going on my faves list for sure. :)
LostInMe chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Excellent! You perfectly captured the spirit of childhood in the first stanza. The second stanza is also good - the feeling of too late, it's over, you can't go back, though you wish you could. Great use of alliteration, too! It works well with the feel of this poem.

May I ask what is the significance of the title?
Abhyank chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
this one is interesting but what does title resemble?
irenethewriter chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
I like how the first stanza is a description of childhood memories while the second stanza is completely different. Good job on this nice piece :)