Reviews for Blood Work
syaugust8 chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
Interesting. You show a lot of creativity in your writing. I'm generally not too into creature features or monsters, but you start the story off quickly with Josh being late for school and soon hearing about a strange animal attack. You capture the "feel" of the characters very well. The characters act like kids their ages should be acting, so good job in that regard. There are some grammatical and spelling errors sprinkled throughout but they can easily be fixed with a run through Spell Check. Also, just a mere quip, but how can the main character see the cruisers coming from seven miles away? Maybe if he's standing on a tall hill or something. Anyway, your story is relatively easy to follow and flows well, keeping people interested with exciting action and a freaky monster. Nice!