Reviews for Once There Was A Fish
igot4 chapter 3 . 11/8/2009
Wait where is the rest of the story? Want more update update:)
igot4 chapter 2 . 11/8/2009
Loving it so far.
Bazooka Joy chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
I just love the way Eloise describes Guy. Nice litle scene you created between the two of them here. A side to him that no one else has seen and she caught it.
Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
First off, I like your vocabulary. And your humor. That Krystal Burgers had me laughing out loud. Seriously. (I think you mean total coincidENCE** btw)

By the way, I haven't seen Sixteen Candles or Pretty In Pink so ya lost me there. Nice beginning though.
Silencia LaRuse chapter 3 . 8/24/2009
This is really well written! I can't wait for more :)
Mo chapter 3 . 8/23/2009
Gotcha!

I don't like it when people swear either. i usually only swear by accident or when i am really really surpised. But that's still on accident.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Mo~
Mo chapter 2 . 8/23/2009
oh boy.

Things are getting interesting :)

~Mo~
Mo chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
She sure is a hellava lot smart!

~Mo~
not-so-fair-maiden chapter 2 . 8/23/2009
I like it! Keep going!
Koki Enwai chapter 2 . 8/23/2009
Hey, this is pretty good so far. I'm really liking it. :)

Can't wait for more.

- KE
ixxemoxxxx chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
I like this a lot, but I would put a little more feeling into the writting. It kinda it like a biography about characters. Even in humor you should get a laughing vibe and a romantic vibe since this is in the romance area.

I think you should continue this story. It's got real good potential. If you want some help feel free to ask me.

Have fun, ;)

Carrie.