Reviews for James Byrnes
righthere431 chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
Ahaha he's so cute...actually they both are!
ShadowHunter149 chapter 4 . 6/27/2010
Nice job! You got straight to the point very quickly and made sure to keep the readers engaged. James seems like a cool guy! Hope you update soon. That last chapter left me very eager to know more about Cadence's past. ;)
queenjade chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
so far so good :)

Im really enjoying it. cant wait for the next update!

and i LOVE james :D


Water Colours chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
Awesome... once again.. xD What exactly happened. .xD
Water Colours chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
:D Love it! :]
righthere431 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I want to know why he was in a bad mood lol.
righthere431 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Cute story!
afan chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
interesting story! i like the farm setting :P

hope you update soon :D
my own prince chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
[I pulled deep, all consuming breaths from the air, filling my lungs past their normal capacity. I was at the end of the road, doubled over, gasping for air after sprinting the last twenty yards to the top of the hill.]

I liked your description here. I could imagine everything. :)
Grace chapter 2 . 9/1/2009
Wow! I like it :) It's not too fast at all, I think they should kiss!

It's very good! Your writing abilities are excellent too!

Please update soon!

Mo chapter 2 . 8/30/2009
Woah. James is definately... forward?

idk. he seems to definately be okay with flirting with random girls that he doesn't know the names of! :D


But he really creeped me out when he immediantley turned cold at the mention of his bad mood. He might not be bipolar, but -in that moment- he was pretty close!


Candy! And her last name is the name of a chocolate company! HAHAHA! i get it xD

Update soon!

notjustink chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
This sounds really good. I cannot wait for the next chapter. :) Keep it up.
Agony of the Heart chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
It's really good! I'm waiting for more I can't wait!
the.5.elements chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
this is a good story, looking forward to some more p
Blossoming Hibiscus chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
I love cliches!
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