Ahaha he's so cute...actually they both are!

Nice job! You got straight to the point very quickly and made sure to keep the readers engaged. James seems like a cool guy! Hope you update soon. That last chapter left me very eager to know more about Cadence's past. ;)

so far so good :)

Im really enjoying it. cant wait for the next update!

and i LOVE james :D

Jade

xoxo

Awesome... once again.. xD What exactly happened. .xD

:D Love it! :]

I want to know why he was in a bad mood lol.

Cute story!

interesting story! i like the farm setting :P

hope you update soon :D

[I pulled deep, all consuming breaths from the air, filling my lungs past their normal capacity. I was at the end of the road, doubled over, gasping for air after sprinting the last twenty yards to the top of the hill.]

I liked your description here. I could imagine everything. :)

Wow! I like it :) It's not too fast at all, I think they should kiss!

It's very good! Your writing abilities are excellent too!

Please update soon!

x

Woah. James is definately... forward?

idk. he seems to definately be okay with flirting with random girls that he doesn't know the names of! :D

hehe...

But he really creeped me out when he immediantley turned cold at the mention of his bad mood. He might not be bipolar, but -in that moment- he was pretty close!

ROFLMAO!

Candy! And her last name is the name of a chocolate company! HAHAHA! i get it xD

Update soon!

~Mo~

This sounds really good. I cannot wait for the next chapter. :) Keep it up.

It's really good! I'm waiting for more I can't wait!

this is a good story, looking forward to some more p

I love cliches!