Reviews for this is my last cigarette
Indefinite chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
ooh, i love this. i love the title, and the meaning, and the verse, "you said too much sometimes.

and at some point, you started lying."
Aiden Payne chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
very interesting with great dialogue and I enjoyed the emphasis of emotions. I enjoyed this, great job! :)
Solemn Coyote chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Tiny nitpick: "I hate that your not around anymore." you're.

Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
You really emphasis the destruction of a relationship in this, and I liked the metaphor of the cigarette in the beginning, it really brought the scope of the poem down to earth.

The ending was so blasé and so perfect, I can imagine this person morphing into someone who doesn’t remember what happened the night before, but when the morning comes she sees the stain on her carpet and realizes just what she, and the other person is capable of. Keep up the good work.

Much love,