|Reviews for Sorcerer's Legacy|
| Witchlight chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
This is my first review, so please excuse me for any mistakes, etc. :)
I thought it was really interesting.
I only I find it kind of difficult to believe that somebody so weak, especially after giving birth, is calling such a great power... or so it seems like it. I would think that Karina would be sleeping or something, but I wouldn't know anything about giving birth. xP
Your grammar and word usage was good!
Overall great job and good start! :)