I loved your story! It's creatively written and has great potential as a comic. I think audiences would really enjoy that format.

Contact info:
Discord: itsgametech
Email: itxgametech at gmail dot com

Best regards,
Sunny

I was listening to the perfect song for this chapter.
The Death Set- Beau Velasco. It's not everyone's taste but I thought it was a very good song that concluded the chapter and story.
I was sceptical about this, but I ended up enjoying every bit of it. Great story :)

Just a perfect ending to a brilliant story. I loved every word of this fic!

Fantastic chapter. Mia's nan rocks!

Another great chapter, well done! :)

This is the first story I've read since signing up to Fiction Press, and I absolutely love it! This chapter is definitely my favourite out of all I've read so far! :)

This sounds so interesting! Your writing is impeccable. Review for review?

From the name I made up you can most probably guess who this is :P

Just literally started browsing the inbox in my other account and stumbled accross this. It's absolutely awesome so far wifey XD

If I read on to find you've abandoned it then I shall find you and destroy you.

Love u loads, my horny cripple

Your "emo" xx

That was a fun story :)

I liked how you involved so many different characters and they all had their own role to play..

Plus the main 3 characters were quite well developed.

Keep writing!

What?dats it?no talking about feelings or anything?Oh I'm disappointed...

Exciting start! I'm really intrigued as to what this will come to, great start!

~HPRK

OMG this chapter was so unbelievably made of win! You can totally see Tia trying to redeem herself, but man, she's done a lot of selfish stuff, all of it oh so realistic too, which makes her all the more scary. But...now the way is clear...will this story have a happy ending? :O

~ Sakina x

Thought this chapter was great as always, and yes, it did fill in a lot of the blanks. Wow, didn't know Tia had it in her to react this badly, but, I guess she's still human underneath all that nastiness. Didn't know your other reviewers hate Ben, hehe! But yeah, I think you portrayed him really realistically throughout this story, and the possible explanation for why he and Tia are together does make sense :)

Edits:

I pulled out [a] small box, took a glance at the packaging and nearly cried with delight.

"Do you think they have one?" [should it be "have done"]

"You know how [your] mum went home to get washed up and stuff?"

I sighed, feeling every iota of longing come rushing back as I [thought] of Ben.

~ Sakina x

D'oh. I thought the summary was one of those fancy airy fairy metaphorical ones...bad me.

Laughed at this line: "Worry can do strange things to a woman's hair."

Ach, the angst here is killing me!

No concrit or anything, so onto the next chapter!

~ Sakina x

Huh, thought I'd left a review for this chappy. Anyhow, loved Mia's inner monologue on her panic over going blind! xDD

Urk, Ben and Mia are just not meant to be, from the looks of it... :(

~ Sakina x