Reviews for Do I Laugh or Cry?
toshica chapter 18 . 1/16/2014
I was listening to the perfect song for this chapter.
The Death Set- Beau Velasco. It's not everyone's taste but I thought it was a very good song that concluded the chapter and story.
I was sceptical about this, but I ended up enjoying every bit of it. Great story :)
somethingleftdesired chapter 18 . 4/18/2013
Just a perfect ending to a brilliant story. I loved every word of this fic!
somethingleftdesired chapter 17 . 4/18/2013
Fantastic chapter. Mia's nan rocks!
somethingleftdesired chapter 11 . 4/15/2013
Another great chapter, well done! :)
somethingleftdesired chapter 9 . 4/15/2013
This is the first story I've read since signing up to Fiction Press, and I absolutely love it! This chapter is definitely my favourite out of all I've read so far! :)
CocoLele chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This sounds so interesting! Your writing is impeccable. Review for review?
You're-mine-not-ashley's chapter 2 . 2/18/2012
From the name I made up you can most probably guess who this is :P

Just literally started browsing the inbox in my other account and stumbled accross this. It's absolutely awesome so far wifey XD

If I read on to find you've abandoned it then I shall find you and destroy you.

Love u loads, my horny cripple

Your "emo" xx
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 18 . 10/16/2011
That was a fun story :)

I liked how you involved so many different characters and they all had their own role to play..

Plus the main 3 characters were quite well developed.

Keep writing!
mahi chapter 18 . 11/20/2010
What?dats it?no talking about feelings or anything?Oh I'm disappointed...
HPRK08 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Exciting start! I'm really intrigued as to what this will come to, great start!

Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 15 . 10/1/2010
OMG this chapter was so unbelievably made of win! You can totally see Tia trying to redeem herself, but man, she's done a lot of selfish stuff, all of it oh so realistic too, which makes her all the more scary. the way is clear...will this story have a happy ending? :O

~ Sakina x
Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 14 . 10/1/2010
Thought this chapter was great as always, and yes, it did fill in a lot of the blanks. Wow, didn't know Tia had it in her to react this badly, but, I guess she's still human underneath all that nastiness. Didn't know your other reviewers hate Ben, hehe! But yeah, I think you portrayed him really realistically throughout this story, and the possible explanation for why he and Tia are together does make sense :)


I pulled out [a] small box, took a glance at the packaging and nearly cried with delight.

"Do you think they have one?" [should it be "have done"]

"You know how [your] mum went home to get washed up and stuff?"

I sighed, feeling every iota of longing come rushing back as I [thought] of Ben.

~ Sakina x
Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 13 . 10/1/2010
D'oh. I thought the summary was one of those fancy airy fairy metaphorical ones...bad me.

Laughed at this line: "Worry can do strange things to a woman's hair."

Ach, the angst here is killing me!

No concrit or anything, so onto the next chapter!

~ Sakina x
Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 12 . 10/1/2010
Huh, thought I'd left a review for this chappy. Anyhow, loved Mia's inner monologue on her panic over going blind! xDD

Urk, Ben and Mia are just not meant to be, from the looks of it... :(

~ Sakina x
Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 11 . 9/29/2010

I could see it coming...I knew it was coming, but still.


Words cannot express how much I hate Tia right now!1!11

Man, this chapter was so epic, and as always, I myself hooked and laughing out loud, like at the James Bond comment. When Kelly talked about the boom, I knew that some serious shzz was gonna go down. Gods, the argument at the end, and Mia's reaction; you wrote those so well.


[Ben's] dark eyes narrowed in annoyance as he looked past me to glare up at Tia

"Okay, everyone[,]" Kelly called suddenly

sending up a great plume of water has he vanished into the sea. [didn't make sense]

~ Sakina x
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