Reviews for An Archduke of New York City
Kijuaki chapter 17 . 4/19/2012
Fantastic story! I really enjoyed it, and even if at first, the story seem 'déjà vu', your writing really give deth to the story. The characters were also really well-made.

And if I can put my little grain of salt- In chapter 10 you use the idiom "Tu es ça va, j'espère?". I guess you meant "Tu va bien, j'espère?", which litteraly translate into "Your doing good, I hope?"

I noticed some other minor french error but they were small so I didn't gave it much thought. And my english is.. well, it is what it is.

If you ever need help with french, it would be my pleasure to help you :)
Rebel.Riot chapter 17 . 2/10/2012
Oh my gosh, that was SUCH a wonderful story. I truly hope you write the second one. I honestly can't find the words to describe how much I loved your story, characters, plot... everything.

Here's hoping you'll continue!
NatalieWilde chapter 17 . 1/25/2012
Fantastic story. I couldn't put it down and read it straight through, so I'm glad it was complete before I found it.

I love Felix best but all the boys draw out strong feelings. So, your writing and ability to create strong characters is amazing. The twists in the story really kept it interesting.

The tragic ending of the first story was hard to take but that's because it was so powerful. The cliffhanger ending of the second story really leaves me wanting to read the sequel...good technique on your part as an author. My only complaint is that in several places you have this great build up to what should be a really hot sex scene that could really establish and demonstrate the tenderness and emotional (as well as physical) vulnerabilities and connection in the relationship...then you just drop it...totally leave us hanging. It certainly leaves one a little disappointed and frustrated. Maybe you're just not comfortable writing detailed sex scenes. I can understand that but when a story is rated "M" one sort of expects it. Anyway, thank you for all your hard work. I'm going to go look for a sequel now!
cantarellaseeker chapter 17 . 1/4/2012
This was a really well written story. Actually, it kind of surprised me, because there's so little relevance to both stories until the very end, yet both are equally enticing in their right. I wanted to read about Luke and Alex, yes I wanted to read about Felix and Lukas too.

I hope that you still have the interest to write part 2, and to write it soon.
Angel chapter 17 . 1/1/2012
Oh my God! I love this! Dear God, I nearly cried when Lukas accidentally stabbed him. Pleaseplease tell me Lukas is wrong and they somehow meet in the afterlife, hell lie to me as long as they get SOME happy ending together. Oh heck, I'm not sure if they're reincarnated(like the summary suggests) or something, just let it all end up okay!

Sorry if this is rambly or confusing, its 4 in the morning and I'm rambly and kinda confused because of the hour, but it was so worth it to bunker down and read this story after waching the ball drop, because this story, excuse my language, is fucking awesome. I consider it a great story when I laugh out loud in one chapter, then almost cry in the next.

You're writing is really beautiful, its better than a lot of the stories I come across. The flow is great, its easy to read, it jumps from the past to the present(for them) easily, never seeming forced. Goodness, I can't tell you how much I love this. Especially that, while it shocked me, I was not expecting it at all, I'm so invested into Felix and Lukas' relationship that I don't care about them being half brothers, I just wanted them together and happy.

There's this myth that whatever you're doing during the very beginning of New Year's is a hint of what the rest of your year will be like, and if that's true I say, "Hell yeah!" because this means I'll read a lot more amazing stories with great dialogue and wonderful characters. I love this, and you so much for writing it! For sure in my top favorite stories for 2011(read the first few chapters a few hours before midnight, xD) and 2012(I don't care if I have nothing to compare it to, that's how much I love this.)

Definitely reccomending this to my friends. Thanks SO much for a great read, I can't wait for the second part, I definitely plan to keep an eye out for it and come back to read this one more than once!
Angel chapter 17 . 1/1/2012
One more thing to add, past and present parents annoy me, lol. Both have qualities that seriously irked me. Especially Luke's dad, I want to punch him so bad. O

And I've just reviewed annonymously too, lol. BloodOfBeautifulDreamers is my account, just too lazy to login, lol. Now I'm off to bed, so excited for the next installment!
Angel chapter 17 . 1/1/2012
One more thing to add, past and present parents annoy me, lol. Both have qualities that seriously irked me. Especially Luke's dad, I want to punch him so bad. O

And I've just reviewed annonymously too, lol. BloodOfBeautifulDreamers is my account, just too lazy to login, lol. Now I'm off to bed, so excited for the next installment!
Angel chapter 17 . 1/1/2012
Oh my God! I love this! Dear God, I nearly cried when Lukas accidentally stabbed him. Pleaseplease tell me Lukas is wrong and they somehow meet in the afterlife, hell lie to me as long as they get SOME happy ending together. Oh heck, I'm not sure if they're reincarnated(like the summary suggests) or something, just let it all end up okay!

Sorry if this is rambly or confusing, its 4 in the morning and I'm rambly and kinda confused because of the hour, but it was so worth it to bunker down and read this story after waching the ball drop, because this story, excuse my language, is fucking awesome. I consider it a great story when I laugh out loud in one chapter, then almost cry in the next.

You're writing is really beautiful, its better than a lot of the stories I come across. The flow is great, its easy to read, it jumps from the past to the present(for them) easily, never seeming forced. Goodness, I can't tell you how much I love this. Especially that, while it shocked me, I was not expecting it at all, I'm so invested into Felix and Lukas' relationship that I don't care about them being half brothers, I just wanted them together and happy.

There's this myth that whatever you're doing during the very beginning of New Year's is a hint of what the rest of your year will be like, and if that's true I say, "Hell yeah!" because this means I'll read a lot more amazing stories with great dialogue and wonderful characters. I love this, and you so much for writing it! For sure in my top favorite stories for 2011(read the first few chapters a few hours before midnight, xD) and 2012(I don't care if I have nothing to compare it to, that's how much I love this.)

Definitely reccomending this to my friends. Thanks SO much for a great read, I can't wait for the second part, I definitely plan to keep an eye out for it and come back to read this one more than once!
Angel chapter 16 . 1/1/2012
Oh...shit. I can't...I just. Woah. Woah. I can't even finish this, so shocked as I am right now. Just...woah.
Angel chapter 15 . 1/1/2012
I know this ended happy for them, uh...physically, lol...but I'm getting the feeling things are about to go bad. I'm actually really nervous about reading these next few, but I shall, and hope for the best!
Angel chapter 14 . 1/1/2012
I lovelovelove this story, but I'm worried about Felix... D: And I was reading this, seeing Alex describe Luke, another Lucas popped into my head. Also gay, and also blonde from a Dutch soap opera I watch. And now he's who I picture for Luke/Lukas. Equally cute. I was also wondering where I could find the profile and character sketches of them? I didn't see them on your profile. My emails if you could link them? Either way, onto the next chapter!
Angel chapter 11 . 1/1/2012
Luke's art teacher kinda scares me, lol. He just seems so...blank I guess. What's up with him? I dunno, but loving it so far!
KiyoshiTanaka chapter 17 . 9/18/2011
This was wonderful, beautifully written, and I'm glad I took the time to read all the way to the end. If you ever decide to write the second half, I'll be here to read it. :)

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 17 . 8/30/2011
You have no idea how hard I'm crying right now. I don't care if it was incest anymore or that the whole thing was Romeo and Juliet-ish (which by the way worked perfectly well) I just...they didn't deserve to die! Although I knew all along that they Lukas and Felix had been reincarnated or whatnot into Luke and Alex. This was such an amazing story and I truly hope that you start the second half asap!
xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 17 . 6/18/2011
That was brilliant! I cried when Felix died though and I'm deperate to know what that last line meant! I need a second bit! Please?
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