Reviews for Her Prince Charming |
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![]() ![]() ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY! It was definitely amazing and awesome. Loved the humour, drama, romance and your ending was absolutely perfect; at least I know it was for me :) Thank you for sharing it here with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is on the professional level... I'm hooked. o_o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay I love this story but I don't like the fact that Mingmei and Liam are so lovey-dovey...It's kind of irritating and sickening...At least in my opinion. Other than that though I really do love this story! So far... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... |
![]() ![]() i feel like i'm reading my personal diary ...if u know what i mean.. :) love the beginning..! this is exactly what i want, too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it no joke |
![]() ![]() ![]() I watched the ten things I hate about you for the first time this morning! Then I find your story and I keep seeing Gabriel as Patrick! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's like you took my best friend and me, melded us together into a supernova romantic character and started this story. I am just SO intrigued. Usually, however, I don't go for this kind of prologue. There's no real hooker in here and prologue's purpose is to hook and reel in the reader. Maybe you need to rethink that? In any case, SO looking forward to reading this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story. love it a LOT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thought i'd just let you know there's a slight error in the epilogue. samara didn't give him a leather jacket at christmas, ming mei did. samara gave him a guitar. apart from that, i think the last few chapters are a bit draggy. there's too much explicit talking about their feelings, something which is very tough to pull off. i think the main thing is there should be more action and doing rather than description of thoughts etc. but that aside, i enjoyed this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have to say... i TEARED during the convo between samara n her mum about her dad |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank god we didnt have this complication of groupies over here in Brunei. We come to school just to learn. As boring as it sound, I never fail my schooling from kiddies school until I finished my college. :) and~ I did have girly gay friend before. He's a fun guy, no we're n0t homophobes likes cough some Malaysian cough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw he finally asked her. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You guys still using chalk? We here didnt use it anymore, it's too dirty. We use whiteboard and marker. Review: Samara getting nice to Gabriel's but I cn feel that's that Awkward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Depressing chapter but It really explain some issues that needed to explain. I dnt like this chapter though but hell! It need to explain w/o this chapter the next chapter would not exist. ;) Thinking possitive. |