Reviews for Blue Sea
steffxnie chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Cute, refreshing poem. I like how the line length increases after each line. It builds up the piece. I like this line best - 'Swimming from coral to coral like love sickā€™ed bee' Write on. ;)
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
:D great rhythm an the poem has a great shape! The "love thee" etc reminds me of Greensleeves. I like the persistence the poem shows ) It's a beautiful thing.

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