|Reviews for Her First Words|
| setogirl2 chapter 12 . 2/13/2010
THIS IS GETTING SO SO INTERESTING
PLEASE continue soon
i might get crazy
i wanna know what will happen next ?
| Suppusan chapter 12 . 2/11/2010
Well to quote Ritsuko "KYA!"... *sigh* Kyouya
| lovebird17 chapter 12 . 2/11/2010
Wow... how anyone can get themselves into such a position is beyond me. I wonder what's going to happen next... this has got to turn out funny!
| eaststar chapter 12 . 2/11/2010
OMG so cute ) But I didn't exactly understand this part: "If he couldn’t win against me in an argument, I on the other hand, couldn’t win when it comes to his childish thoughts!" how did his childish thoughts help him win and win what? CAN"T WAIT TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| setogirl2 chapter 11 . 2/10/2010
you should complete this soon
i cant wait to see more
| setogirl2 chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
i love your writing
and the story is so good
can i ask something ? are you a fan of skip beat cuz no matter how i see it there is a lot of similarities with skip beat
| eaststar chapter 11 . 2/8/2010
I just love the ending! It put me on edge without making me too suspenceful. This passage, however, seemed slightly awkward;
"‘Maybe she’s just shy?’ I thought in consideration. If she is, it’s quite cute. I chuckle in amusement silently. "
If you want to make him the smart mysterious guy, the last line, where he chuckles is fine. But then it wouldn't fit with the the previous "
"‘Maybe she’s just shy?’ I thought in consideration. If she is, it’s quite cute."
, which sounds more like your every day guy.
There are a couple other errors in your story, but they are just multiple small grammatical things which can be quickly fixed up by a sharp-eyed editor.
Otherwise, thank you thank you thank you for adding another wonderful story to fiction press! Can't wait till the next chapter!
| suppusan chapter 11 . 2/8/2010
this chapter made me smile. and chuckle. please update soon! i luv this story :)
| naito-kun chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
omg so cute! love how ritsuko got caught up in all the mascot mess haha!
| eaststar chapter 10 . 1/18/2010
I LOVE THIS You should totally get this published! I never really liked anime until I met your story. I really want this to be published-and it probably would be made into a movie after wards because it's so good! Just needs a little bit of revising. So publish it, or else I will do it myself :) But if you actually do decide to publish this, can you still continue on the chapters? So I can say that I was one of the first readers of Arisa Hanari's classic "Her First Words."? Please please please finish it on ficpress at least and my life would be truly complete :)
| whitewing1339 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I really loved the last chapter a lot and hope that you don't forget about this story cause I really want to read more.
| whitewing1339 on other sites chapter 9 . 12/31/2009
I really like your story and cannot wait to read the next chapter I don't have an account here but stumbled onto this site and really like the mangas and really like this one and wanted to say this.
| lovebird17 chapter 9 . 12/26/2009
Hi! I really liked your story. It reminds me a bit of Skip Beat, but in a good way.
| Suppusan chapter 9 . 12/25/2009
U HAV TO UPDATE! THIS IS SO ADDICTING TO READ! IT REMINDS ME OF SKIP BEAT BECAUSE BOTH HAVE ARROGANT SINGERS AND THE MAIN CHARACTER IS A MASCOT FOR A SHOW (EVEN THOUGH THEYRE DIFFERENT ANIMALS BUT BEAR, CHICKEN. POTATO, POTAHTO)PLEASE UPDATE! I JUST ATE SOME CAKE SO IM A LITTLE EXCITED! .
| eaststar chapter 9 . 12/25/2009
LOL! Finally finally finally a chapter! Just wanna let you know that I am addicted to this and gave up a part of my rushed morning to read it! Speaking of rushed mornings, gotta go bye!