Reviews for Nanami
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I loved it ‹3 I almost cried at the end It reminded so much
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
One word: WOW :)
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
This was just about the most beautiful thing I have ever read.

Amazing imagery & word choice. Wonderful. Favorite.
StarlightWish17 chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
Wow that was so beautiful. This is my new favorite. :) I wanna read it over and over. Haha. I love that last line. It's so - just - I dunno - it like grips me or something. It's so amazing. O-o And I love the description. I could picture everything so perfectly. You never cease to amaze me! Haha. :D

I love cello's by the way.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
this is an exceptional poem. one that i will read, read, and continue to read.

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Louis Denair chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
The lush descriptions captured my heart entirely and brought about unprecedented rapture of language delight. "Edenic galaxy" was especially creative. I was absolutely moved towards the end. The way you connect the end of the first stanza with the second by the ending line: "Darling, it is raining."

For you, I am raining.

It's absolutely heartwarming and masterful. I absolutely fell for this artful illusion. I believed the characters, I felt the emotions. Great job.
Isca chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
"Sepia skin painted with shadows." I love the imagery here - it's divine. The 's' alliteration definitely gives this line some added character.

"A golden peony so easily crushed." Brilliant metaphor.

"For you, I am raining." What a sweet ending. I love the rain, myself. ;)