|Reviews for Defeating Death|
| Mike73 chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Well this seems pretty good so far. I want to see more soon, so hurry up and post the next chapter! :)
| Morgan Sakana chapter 5 . 10/12/2009
This story is off to a good start. I'm not usually one for ghost stories, but you really grabbed my attention. But, overall, you might want to consider this one question: What is the theme here? I mean, it's obvious this ghost girl has a strange past and all, and apparently Oscar is to die at some point, but otherwise, it honestly seems like just a bunch of events squished together.
Don't get me wrong, I really do like this story. I'm just telling you where I stand at this point. I would really like to see this story carried out, though.
Keep on rockin'!
| oxlaura chapter 3 . 9/23/2009
pretty good! Keep writing!