Reviews for My Prince of Ice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm annoyed that she would just get together with Nick when the only reason he broke up with his gf is because she was cheating on him. He distanced himself from his friend for popularity and in the end he gets his cake and eats it too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im rereading this story and got to the end of the chapter where shesays she lives in northern michigan. What a small world. I live in traverse city michigan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You mix up Jake and Tyler sometimes, which is confusing and there are your and you're typos here and there along with tense problems, but otherwise, it's pretty good so far. c: I'm not sure if I really do like these characters too much though. :\ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() D'awwwwww! Well, awkward but cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tyler! Nick is nice but Tyler is cute... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, yo, nice. |
![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO O! WHYYYYYYYY |
![]() ![]() NOOO DONT MAKE HER TELL HIM HE'LL BE CRUSHED SHE SHOULD STAY WITH HIM |
![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOO! WHYYYYYY SHE BELONGS WITH TYLER |
![]() ![]() NOOOOOO! you can't make liz end up with nick it's just not right she needs to be with tyler |
![]() ![]() ![]() nnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooo i want her and tyler to get together |
![]() ![]() ![]() liz is a smart girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() thi is great so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() You use the wrong names quite frequently. I overlooked the others because it was a one off error in the chapter but you changed blake's name entirely here. It really ruins the story for me. |