|Reviews for Work In Progress|
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I like the tie ins betweenthe fact that this poem is a little bit like a work in progress, yet that's what the poem is all about. Simple yet really good. Theres something really talented about being able to say a lot in very few words.
Well done :)
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
nice one, work in progress _*
| SacrificialLamb chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Honestly this needs a lot of work. There is no way to sum you up in such short and scattered lines. Everything is left hanging, how are you a work in progress, what about you keep changing what are these situations. Don’t leave the reader hanging unless it is intentional which is not an option with this type of poem