Reviews for to Sofie, 1
Isca chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
"I do not think that I shall ever be rid of you." Oh God. The angst here is completely overwhelming. I can relate to this line so well - it's incredible. :)

"You shut me out of your powder box." The tone of this line is very powerful.
Amaury chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Beautiful.

What a fantastic vocabulary you have.

"You shut me out

Of your powder box."

I especially liked this line and the image that it produced.

"you are the next taint of my skin."

Hm. Reminds of perfume kind of. If that makes any sense.

Fabulous work.