Reviews for Perfect Hypocrisy
Achtunsen chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
You really captured those emotions in this piece. And yes, to reiterate, the layout just seems to add that extra punch to those words. You definitely have a gift.
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
"Girls fall apart over boys, as if the

opposite gender were the source of

the oxygen we breath"

Also that last line captured some feeling in me.

Wow. You're good at this, and your layout makes it all the more dramatic, you break it up in just the perfect spots.