I like how started and finished with "staggering". It kinda brought everything full circle.

Awesome story. I'm so glad that I stumbled upon it.

grt story!

sry, writing frm my phone.

man candy! nice job

Keep wrting

haha, nice. can't wait for more ~ Alenor

This is interesting. Oh, I noticed that this chapter started and ended with the word 'staggering'. Hehe, I was amused by it.

O man candy, we all know how that livens up the dull workplace :).

You have a really good writing style, and I'm interested to see where this story leads. Update soon please :)!

I like this :)

Can't wait to get more of the man candy haha

Keep updating!

-WhydoIloveyou