Reviews for Today
Naver chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I understand this one, when I lose people I care about I'm still in shock also. Great job, continue to write. :)
NocturnalNerd chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
It's very odd. I don't understand the "poison cake", or why someone would sell one, but I like it's bluntness.
Memorys Shadow chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
That's terribly sad, but it's a pointed sadness. If people don't care enough about other people, they'll find themselves alone. Your syntax and word choice excelently convey lonlieness, with a slight twinge of regret. Keep up the good work.
skyward squidly squee chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Interesting. I'm trying to figure out the meaning of the second line, it could mean different things. ... This is like pretty and pretty sad. Hm.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
O that’s terrible, but it’s good. How could you write such a thing? The last line reminded me of a Haiku.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Short and sweet. Very beautiful!