Reviews for The Same
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Very powerful, I love all the comparisons, they're really interesting. :D The beginning is interesting with the scattered and shattered, the whole thing just has a very neat choice of words. Fantastic work. :D

rolliepollie44
BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Pretty. Simple and beautiful. :)

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DiaRose chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Wow, pretty pretty. I like it, it's simple and rich with symbolism. My only problem is that the word envelope in this context has no e at the end. Great job at the poem though.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
"But all remains the same"

liked how scattered and shattered sounded in the first two lines, it gave me a feeling of being lost(dunno, i'm weird)

your imageries are really good, overall, i liked it