Wow ! I really love it ! There just not Enough details. I mean, it's not gruesome enough !

But still a great work. I really love Vincente at the end. So cool XD. I don't really care about Vitale, I mean... You don't give him the same depth of character than Vicente, I think we could have a bit of more details about him.

But otherwise it's great! Thank you for writing this story.

D.B

(I'm french, sorry for spelling mistakes if there are any XD )

So good... needed to stay up and finish...

I liked it Wa sso dark and cliche? WHat cliche? I'll admit that I doubted Aldo from the beginning (who wouldn't? The events at the beginning seemed to imply thus) but then I thought 'no way' so I was totally surprised when it DId end up being him. Get the weird logic? NO? Oh well.

I liked that Vitale didn't eat Vicente. Even if there's no romantic stuff, I sensed that Vitale needed a companion and Vicente seemed to become like him anyway. Get the weird logic? No? Oh well.

Gore-wise, it was sufficiently gory, but not enough to be horrendously gory, mild gore I say. I found it well-writ and it sorta pulls at your soul. Or something.

K, in short, keep writing. Until your next story, then.

ALright, alright! I'm on chapter 4 and I've been successfully hooked. I love horror when it's done right and this seems creepy- just the way I likes it!

I'm glad this story is done or I might be mad if I have to wait for an update. Hehheh

I WOULD SAY i Love Vicente (and I do) but I haven't seen enough of his character (which is about to change at this point I figure) to say much except I totally understand the role of people like him in families.

Dead hand beckoning.. what's that all about. Guess I'll have to find out.

Good Job btw, not too certain about what your romances are like, but I'm liking your horror. It's finally kicking in!

Oh, don't stop on behalf of this review- keep going!