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![]() ![]() ![]() I think rather than using untrusting, you should try distrustful. Otherwise, your poem is fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() contrairy to the previous review, i really like the format of this poem. it feels rushed and almost desperate, which i really liked. good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s very short; I think you should lengthen it. That said I did enjoy it, but it needs work, I don’t like the way you spaced it either it’s too choppy this way |