Reviews for MiMe
Aerwiya chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Okay, because I always give corrections first... Here goes...

-I don't have much to complain about with this poem because I'm getting a feeling that it came from the heart and that always gives it more meaning. However, I suppose word choice could've been a little more creative and effective.


Now what I liked...

-again, it seemed heartfelt

-My favorite lines were "Here I am breathing in everything I know/ And catching the scent of everywhere I’m going to go"

-totally relatable to anyone who has ever written.

Yay! Nice work!
Aiden Payne chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
this is a really good writing that I'm sure most writers can relate to, and I really really enjoyed the flow to this as it was very symmetrical. Great work. :)
lymli chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
the imagery is wonderful.