|Reviews for MiMe|
| Aerwiya chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Okay, because I always give corrections first... Here goes...
-I don't have much to complain about with this poem because I'm getting a feeling that it came from the heart and that always gives it more meaning. However, I suppose word choice could've been a little more creative and effective.
Now what I liked...
-again, it seemed heartfelt
-My favorite lines were "Here I am breathing in everything I know/ And catching the scent of everywhere I’m going to go"
-totally relatable to anyone who has ever written.
Yay! Nice work!
| Aiden Payne chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
this is a really good writing that I'm sure most writers can relate to, and I really really enjoyed the flow to this as it was very symmetrical. Great work. :)
| lymli chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
the imagery is wonderful.