Reviews for The Return of the Ex
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
I love how they changed for one another just for the relationship to work for their situation. :)
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Awwr(:

A little abrupt but i like it xD
MarieAnn chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
This deserves a sequel. I really liked your writing in this story. Great job!
Jodirium chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Nice one-shot.

I really liked Chelsea's obsessed watch over Josh in the beginning. C:

Your writing style is also very easy to read, so, yes, well done.

Read 'Fling' if you have the chance.

- Signed as J.
LondonLi chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Yeah, another one-shot! Although this one seems like a sequel is required to see if they make it! Thanks for posting!
Alux chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Is this story close to your experience?

You write very well. Some of the ideas of the girls seem immature, yet realistic but I expect the narrator to know better. I'd like to see more of the immature narrator if that is possible.

If this story was not close to your experience, then this is pretty good. If this is similar to your own experience, I'd like to see something original that you're creating because your writing and narration seems to have enormous potential.