Reviews for The Paymaster
J112011 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Inflation replaces hell? Interesting. I'm not sure I would agree, but it sure is disorienting when you come back from vacation to find out that in two months the price for everything doubled.

Well written story. Keep writing! How come you've switched to haikus?
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Oh dear. I thought this was going to have some religious moral about the 'honest' businessman not liking dishonest money (well, to expect that from you..).

But this is just way better, you're a genius, I'm sorry if I keep saying that! I love your political ones best :D
LostInMe chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Very entertaining and very clever.
Isca chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
"Make it a long one." I like the tone of this line. The reader can definitely tell that Mona is upset with Joe.

"Pete said you buy souls." Ahahaha. Brilliant line.

The ending is perfect and hilarious-Inflation as Hell!
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
loved it! i like how your charcter's dialogue is so believable, natural. your one-shots are priceless! great!
natmarie chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Haha. I love the subtle jabs through out and your end lines are priceless. Great job.
grey280 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
(Insert evil cackle here)

The Devil is in the details, you're right!
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
:) Clever especially in this modern times.
poooooooooooooooooooop chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
haha! hilarious ending! I loved it.
J.A. Fletcher chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
This was your best political satire yet. You are able to provide politics, humor, and plot in your stories, and still keep them interesting. Great job on this one.
SirScott chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Another good story I loved the remark about inflation.

SirScott
Mirabella chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
A comment on the economy today? Nice!