Reviews for The Pains of the Rich American Girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww i luv stories like these. but wat i love the most is wen high school sweethearts end up married with kids. that rarely happens in real life. thats y i love reading it in books so much! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story! I am going to miss Sam, Jack, Nicole, and all the other characters...even though i only read this for, umm...one day... " It was a super cute story so i got hooked. Awesome Job~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I can't believe it's over! It was a really sweet story and I'm going to miss Jack and Nicole! I feel like I'm saying goodbye to my best friends! :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, i wonder what would happen when she found out James is Jake (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I can't wait to read for the next chapter. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story! When you say 'Will' make sure it looks like that rather than 'will' people will get confused... That's almost the only flaw I noticed...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eek! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sounds good now. The previous chapter makes more sense now that you took out the other stuff. It just confused me for a bit there. But yeah, I think it's funny how everyone but Nicole knows that Jack's her mystery date. And man, her parents irk me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found your story and loved it (; Jack is just so sweet! can't wait for Nicole to see that her mystery date is actually Jack (: (\ /) (0.0) (_) Bunpire |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw ... Great chapter! Love it! Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw ... So sweet! Thanks for replying to my PM! I know it was probably really annoying, but I just had to ask! |
![]() ![]() ![]() idk, it just seems that they're too young to "fall in love" What are they? 16? I just dont see it happening. And there are several loopholes in this story ~what was Matt doing at the airport and why does he even care to explain things anymore? ~why did Jack's parents, as responsible adults, go along with Nicole's plans? ~Nicole can't legally buy her own plane ticket since she's under age ~the airport staff can get fired for letting someone pass into unauthorized areas I'm sorry, I know it's not my place to be saying this since it's not my story, but I just thought I'd point those things out incase you wanted to go back and edit your story later on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() idk, it's just that even after everything, leaving just seems too irrational. I just dont see how she can just decide to leave like that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw ... No! She can't leave him! It's torture! For both of them! She isn't going to leave him. Right? RIGHT? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eek! *does happy dance* I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! Mwahahahaha! Sorry about my breakdown ... I blame it on too much coffee. Anyway, it was a great chapter, but I'm sad for Nicole! I mean, a new sister/brother at her age! I'd kill my mom! Also, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! |