Reviews for Falling Apart
yzarC chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
you write great stories... NINJAS STAR COOKIES! (sorry had to say that)XD
strawberryshortcake101 chapter 4 . 11/17/2009
:0! THIS IS JUST AMAZING!

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
anber chapter 4 . 11/14/2009
AMAZING STORY SO FAR! please please please X10 post more chapters ! X
bigXxdreamer chapter 4 . 9/12/2009
wow...

i actually cried a little in this chapter...

amazing story..
Caoimhe Rose chapter 4 . 9/7/2009
okay, that was amazing! the raw emotion, it was so, so, so, raw!

yeah i am sad/mad at you, because you killed Logan. all i have to say is that usually its the good people who die. so really we can't be mad at you.

i can't wait to see what happens next, and how Nicole's relationships with Nick and Chad go. please update soon!
GraceElaganceandBeauty chapter 4 . 8/31/2009
Why did you kill Logan I actually started crying? Couldn't have been the Dad instead?
iiLovePumkinPiexD chapter 4 . 8/30/2009
This chapter made me cry! :'{

Amazing story though...:{
darkgurl92 chapter 4 . 8/30/2009
OMG...why did logan die...that's not fair.

it should've been the dad...i liked logan...

update soon..
Manga Girl Lover chapter 4 . 8/30/2009
oh... my... goodness gracious. No! Logan Can't be dead! he's too awesome! ack! how could this happen? at least the dad didn't beat him which is what I had originally thought. But still... no. I love the story so far. a LOT so I can't wait for you to update again! :D
MistressBlack852 chapter 4 . 8/29/2009
:O omg... :'(
poohketchix chapter 4 . 8/29/2009
OMG. that's all i can say. :))

UPDAATE!
Hazelnut Romance chapter 4 . 8/29/2009
omg. why did logan have to die? that's so unfair. i was crying when i read it. hope to see another update soon. and would we see more of why nick and logan were so angry at each other all the time?
cosmopolitan chapter 4 . 8/29/2009
wow... intense, interested to see where you take this next...
cosmopolitan chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
so... now that everythign is cleared up im giving this story a fair shot :D lol.

anyway, i like how nick appears jealous of the relationship btwn logan and nicole, clearly feeling liek the third wheel (but then even when he does try to rectify that he fails miserably, like with the whole movie fiasco) but he deserves it as, truly, he is quite the ass...

chad... ah, chad, one of my least fav names, but he is pretty damn swt...

enjoying this, off to read more.
cosmopolitan chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
*sigh* im such a huge fan of your pieces but as much as i'm trying to force myself to read this one i just cant after having read the original (from the reunion and in the perspective of logan's fiancee... i was really hoping she and logan would end up together not he and the ex...)

ah well, looking forward to what you post in your other stories, otherwise
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