Reviews for Downhill Through Time
LostInMe chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Excellent metaphor. The execution is fantastic - it all reads smoothly, and the rhymes are good. Really great job!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
That is a rather drastic metaphor for the passing time and the fact there’s nothing we can do against it. I hope you will soon skate uphill again.


P.S. I love the rhyme “faster – past her”!

P.P.S. schön, dass du mal wieder ein Gedicht geschrieben hast!