Reviews for The Postman
anika k chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
This was an interesting read. [: I enjoyed it. I like how you show all the different people through the postman's eyes, and the repetition in each paragraph. There were a few missing commas and a skipped apostrophe ("Lets go in and have some fun" should be "Let's go in..."), but great job overall! I definitely think you rose to the challenge.