|Reviews for KissCut|
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Holy shit. This was fucking awesome.
| Isca chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Lux, you are very welcome, my friend. I enjoy reading your work. :)
"I'm going to give you all the violets." Honestly, I love this opening line - it's so lyrical and romantic.
"And when I crush you between my palms." I like the subtle sadistic tone here - as if the speaker enjoys feeling life fade away.
"And cull the ones I like." Wow. Nice use of the word 'cull.'
"Can I drag them, baby?" YES. My God. What a brilliant line. I love it. :D
| anika k chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
This is really amazing. Just... wow. I can't really pinpoint what I like the most because I like all of it. Brilliant job. Definitely one of my favorites on the site.