|Reviews for A Bittersweet Feeling|
| 1maylee9 chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
That was creepy, disturbing, and I LOVED IT! I was staring at my screen with wide eyes while reading this. Nicely done.
| Aaralyn4 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
That was really good. I also like the impression that the man has been listening to the TV show; very creepy. There's something about this story that's just so...real, and relatable. I'm sure we've all sat up late at night, watching a scary movie, too scared to move or make a sound for fear of something knowing we're there. Very good work making this relatable.
I would suggest reviewing, or getting someone to review, your spelling in a few spots. It can take away a little from the flow of the story. And I think the title should say 'Bittersweet' not 'Bitterseet."
But you have a really great story here, with a little editing, it will be just perfect!