Reviews for Crimson Bullets
Gabriella F chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Aww... Reading the summary, I thought she would kill Toni, but then, reading the story I saw she was going to kill herself, and in the end, Toni payed the price anyway. Nice plot twist, and sad ending. Something exactlyI was browsing for.
GoddessOfCreativity chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
*Tear* This story is a typical "I want to die, life sucks" but SO much better. So much raw emotion, and heart. I almost cried. Beautiful, stunning piece of work. Keep Going. Where does all this pain come from?
Devil's Playground chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
This is a really chilling story. The idea of attempting suicide is bad enough, but the thought of someone you love paying for it is even worse. You did a good job of building tension and creating emotion despite the shortness of the piece. There were some minor conventional errors - for example "crimson bullets that was suppose to take away my life"; the "was" should be "were" to agree with the subject. If you give it a quick proofread, I'm sure you can fix everything easily. Overall, very well done!
JamezBfod chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I love stories of horrific irony.