| Reviews for Safe With Me |
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  fortuneismymuse chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 Hi. I know you've gotten positive reviews so far, and I don't want to be a killjoy and offer up criticism. There's bad in my review, I'll be honest right now. I think the issue I really had with this oneshot was plot/character holes. It didn't add up. No one figured out Amelia's secret until this oneshot... but she's a terrible liar. And Mitch never even thought about Amelia and suddenly he's lusting after her? It's a cute story, it really is. I did enjoy it. I'm sure you don't believe that after what I just said, but I really did. The idea behind your story pulled me in right away. That's one of the reasons why I reviewed; I usually don't. And please don't be too offended and hate me. :) I remember when I got my first critical review. I was mad and upset at first, but it helped me a lot as a writer. |
 BethyT chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 "Edward "I'm so shiny" Cullen" Best. Line. Ever! Awesome story, and really original, too. Great work. |
| jammi chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 Random or not, I liked it. It was cute, the supernatural part of it blended in smoothly and didn't seem so out there even though it was out there. |
| Sapphyre Nymph chapter 1 . 12/24/2009 cute... :) |
| Ck90 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009 It was really cool! |
| Spurlunk chapter 1 . 12/8/2009 cute. xD I like it. |
| HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 1 . 12/4/2009 Naw I wanna be a mind reader LOL. It's such a sweet piece man, I lover it :D Keep up the great work:) |
| SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 12/4/2009 soo cute! |
| EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 11/12/2009 That is so cute! Nicely done! |
| so cute chapter 1 . 11/3/2009 i wish you would write a sequal to this or make it into a full blown story. I love this story line, its ver intersting and cute! either way, i love the story! xoxo |
| Beautiful Destination chapter 1 . 10/26/2009 I love this story! I've always wondered what it would be like to read minds...would make life less interesting, but would also reduce unnecessary drama. Hmm... Anyway, great job! Mitch is adorably funny :) |
| Freak Of Music chapter 1 . 10/24/2009 AWESUM FANTASTIC FABULOUS AND more this story is freakin awesum bt plz continue and make it into a story! |
| wookborm chapter 1 . 10/17/2009 DUDE! WHY DIDN'T YOU MAKE THIS A TWO-PARTER? I wanna see 'em go out on a date! D; In fact, why not make it a whole story? With like a billion glorious chapters! :D And it'd be AWESOME if you updated n a daily basis! Nice... But that's too much to ask, so just come up with more freaking awesome one-shots, 'kay? Thanks! - poop |
| funnechick chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 This was awesome! I really enjoyed reading it! |
| renegade01 chapter 1 . 9/21/2009 aww...cute and funny. nice. ;) |