Reviews for Safe With Me
monotone rainbows chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I thought this was a really great story, although I was a bit confused as to why Mitch's thoughts weren't entering her head. Good job though :)
Marie Charlotte chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
pinkguppie chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Very cute story! Just one thing; it says she managed to avoid him for a couple of days but then she says 'like I told you yesterday' (and he later says 'yesterday, when you') - conflicting statements.

Very cool story, not quite realistic yet but in a couple of years who knows? The way you portrayed her gift was better than in any other story I have read so far. Keep up the good work.

its-like-i-sed chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
hii i really liked this story it was kinda sweet Xx
RoseBriar32192 chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
AWESOMENESS! I'm glad I found this, and yes it was rather random, but that's what makes it COOL! Anyway, maybe I'll read some more from you! - RoseBriar

(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on AWESOME books!)
Pundit chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
It was cute. You might want to take out the Sookie Stackhouse reference though. I don't know if you've ever read the book series, but the situation and your heroine's complaints are almost exactly like Sookie's. It's not that you're copying or anything, it's just that the reference immediately made me start comparing your story to Charlaine Harris'. I usually try to keep things like that separate in my mind, but as soon as YOU brought it up, I couldn't help the comparisons. Cute story though. Thanks for posting.
Nikki chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Fantastic! Very well written, interesting plot, and great characters. You have a knack for writing one shots.
Amber chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Oh, I loved this! It was hilarious, but sweet at the same time. Really liked your characterization, too D
jeepers09 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
This was good! A very fun read. Yay for you!
rddekker chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
that's awesome. :)) we! write a longer version of this, puh-lease? :)
Nica chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
"This is such a random piece of fiction, I don't even know what to say"

This is such an awesome piece of fiction, I don't even know what to say!


Noie chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Great job with this. You created some really intersting characters and I'd love to see more of them. I hope you right about their first date!
Muggle Minx chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Well, it's original, not the reading minds part, but the rest of it is.

I like it!
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