Reviews for 21:33
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Ahh, Melanie! You're poetry does something to me, I swear. Haha! It's like, these simple things that bring a smile to my face because the delivery was just so d**m good! I love this. :)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Cool piece! Could turn it into a haiku but I really like it the way it is. The format really suits what's being said. Keep writing and posting girl!

~Anna~ _