Reviews for The Red Ball
Gizmooo chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
By the way, good story. Nice and depressing, but the changing from day to day is rather abrupt, doesn't give the feeling of time passing at all. Just thought you might want to look at that
Selly chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
As long as we are goin with similar sonding adjectives... Meanie moony.
Jhaynee chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
That was so sad. I liked this piece, I love the word choices and the description, but that was so sad.

The representation of the red ball in comparison to Mark's fate was really well done.

Great job!