|Reviews for Knight Shift|
| Chocolate is Yummy chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
haha~ Ending's cute. ;) nice enjoyable little one shot. .
| FLIPPER66 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I COULD SEE THAT HAPPENING NOW LOL UH DUNDER DJ TURN THE DUMB MIKE OFF LOL ENJOYED IT . MAKES GOOD FODDER FOR A DEVELOPING STORY THOUGH.
| cmintcandy chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Oh, crap that's CUTE! I'm giggling and clapping my hands, it's so fun! XD I really thought you described the Radio DJ place well, and his movements around his room (not that I would know, it just sounds like it's might be accurate XD), and I thnk that was a very awesome ending.
| windyday chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Ahh that was just the fuzzy fix I was looking for. Well written, charming, loveable characters and some angst. Gosh, what more could you ask for? Awesome story. :).
| Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
He reminds me of one of my favourite DJs. Lovely.
| ghurl00 chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
| SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
that was soo cute!
| balloonfista chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
shwet...and so original ;)
| Erisah Mae chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
This was very cute. I liked how nobody really let Eric off the hook for having been awful, but also how it all played out- Eric's character was fun to read.
The awesome is in the details, and I liked how you seem to get that.
| Perennial Rhinitis chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
A little corny, but then I am corny. Short, with no unnecessary decorations.
| Ravina chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Haha, I absolutely LOVED the ending!
| Kyllex chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
This. Was. Amazing. Ahh! It's so cute. The entire thing just made me smile, and the ending made me laugh. Silly Eric. Anyway, this was super sweet, I loved it. Great job!
| its.Nothing.Special chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
AHH BEST EVER! hahha super creative and cute. love refreshing new situations like this. great writing and great story!
| barelyamiable chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
| AKAAKAAKA chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
I love this story, at first I thought it would suck (sorry, the result of being let down lately by so interesting but...well...grammar and dialogue wise...disappointing. But when I read it, I went Kya!...You made me sleep late cause I was playing it in my head DX.
Anyway, I just want to say a few things:
1.) Try to break the paragraphs a bit more, as the reading through a screen isn't really fun especially if you have to concentrate a bit more. So making it one or three lines then break would be a good style.
2.) Thank you for not giving the physical features of the character, it gives the reader a chance to imagine them themselves, and it works very well to your advantage and writing style.
3.) Dialogue is wonderful! *hugs* and using song titles as mediums of emotion was a nice touch. The best part is, you didn't place in lyrics !
Soo all in all! You're now a favorite author from another a romance fan! XD