i like it so you need to update soon :)

I like it so far. It is fairly well written, but there is one confusing part. At one point you switch from Emma to Julien (in the middle of a chapter) suddenly and with no sign to your reader that the switch is happening. Otherwise I liked it.

I want to know what happens next.

Even though you've writter 3 chapters i found the end of chapter 3 very alluring, which makes me curious as to what happens in the next chapter. I feel so sorry for Emma, just because she's plain looking doesn't mean she isn't beautiful at least she's not a skank like that Delilah chick. I really love where this story is going and am on edge about whats going to happen next, so plz update soon! XD

I really like this story so far! Keep up the great work!