Reviews for Boy, you're dead to me
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
omg this is really good :D
Ry chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Wow O.o!

I loved it!, gawd your an awesome writer
Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 1 . 5/12/2010

"Many times I've tasted that smile you think so highly about

But sweetie, you should know, it was bitter against my mouth"


"I've got several shiny scars on my chest from being broken

By several silly little boys who think they can fuck with my emotions"

Were the best lines every. I've actually started singing it to a tune now - if you made it into a song, i'd totally buy it!
Gen chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Woah, really, really gOd! Really angsty and strong! Love it!
Subbie chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Oh this is reall amazing. I like it so much
Elle Winters 9 chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Well wasn't that a refreshingly powerful piece. I liked it.
OdairBear chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I liked this a lot.

You used the words in a really clever way and I really felt the emotion in it.

Great Job! :)
Keela1221 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
WOW, that was really really great! Holy Damn I read it four times. Great great job!
Amorous chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Holy wow, that was amazing. Very well written. I thouroughly enjoyed this, especially: "Many times I’ve tasted that smile you think so highly about. But sweetie, you should know, it was bitter against my mouth." So good. (:
Loveless Breath chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
I really like the ending. Kind of like "Though we were together you never really had me."
DArkFLy chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I know this may sound strange, but I giggled while I read this. It is one of my favouriets now. This poem/song i\really is well writen and sounds like a great story.