Reviews for Ode to feet
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
The punctuation here is really odd. You only have those two periods, but that middle part is more than one sentence and those last two lines should have a period.

I liked the idea here. Feet are so important to us. I can't imagine life without them. They definitely deserve an ode. I think yours was a good one. Only thing is the last line's phrasing seemed a bit forced for the rhyme.

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Mirabella chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
A lovely ode to feet!

Your poems are refreshingly original!