Reviews for Metamorphosis
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
"Metamorphasis"... Metamorphosis

"poof! said the girl as she disappeared"... "Poof!" said the girl

"fell into the water Her lungs deflated"... water. Her

"sank and wept Her salty tears"... wept. Her

I thought the idea was interesting. I also think your descriptions were pretty good and I loved that last line. The only thing is I don't get if this happened on purpose or what. It was a tad confusing.

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