Reviews for Starvation
Mizamour chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Wow. This is amazing... what awesome writing and characterization, and imagery too! Awesome! I love your work! Write more!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Well done !

~ Noelle ~
Toker chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
Okay, I was confused at some parts, but I thought this was pretty good!

Is this part of a bigger storyline?

If so (and in the off-chance you actually still read your reviews after so long without an update)

could you please continue?
tastyboy chapter 1 . 5/8/2001
wow! dream like and kool knack for the morbid. u rock w/ the descriptions. when will u write more?
La De Da chapter 1 . 5/7/2001
If this is a rewriting of B&B it should be in fairy tales. Good start (I'd suggest rating it higher because it gets a little bloody, and that's not good if it's rated PG). Interesting idea, a poetic vampire (I'm assuming the narrator is a vampire). Since, I recently read an article that said to also make suggstions, here are some: I really like your word choice it is incredibly poetic, and I intend to read your poetry to see if it is as good, but you need to tighten it up some, there's a few grammatical errors/spelling mistakes, but other than that, it is very well written and quite a good idea.
Evil Rasputina chapter 1 . 5/6/2001
that was so sad yet so good...Very very intrueging!