|Reviews for Polly's Ice Cream Tree|
| Astarel chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
I found this inexplicably cute and charming _
| SoneAnna chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I like the idea for this. Its very inventive, and I have to say it makes me envious I don't have an ice cream tree of my own. (lol) And I think that, even, if you used "bigger" words or longer sentences, etc. this could be turned into a convincing humour or fantasy story. Kudos.
The ending was kinda...blah. No offense. It IS kind of disappointing, as if to think "Oh. Polly and co. won't go on and live happily ever after with the ice cram tree?" but also kind of "...really?" with the use of that cliche.
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| MixTape4TheHeart chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Aw, that was pretty cute until the ending. Cliche's are a sure way to turn off just about everyone. I want and ice cream tree though, that'd be cool.