ouch... looks like megan's got her work cut out for her.

the banging of the doors at the end was funny. like father like daughter. ;)

please update soon! this story is starting out great! how old are the main characters?

I'm so excited to read a new story from you. I love your writing style, it's easy to really get into the story. Jack and Megan look like they are going to be in for a rough ride. I'm definitely looking forward to it. And little Cecile's comment was awfully interesting. "You're not thin." That's quite an introduction. Let's hope that's just the anger and not her outlook on things. Haha. Well yay for a new story :)

jack has some anger management to handle

I like it!

Looking forward to the next chapter and getting deeper into your new story :)

a nice chapter.. update soon