|Reviews for Princess Susan and the Pea|
| akucharger chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Lovely. I especially liked the way you ended the story where you did. That way the readers get to complete the story for themselves.
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
This is so good! it's almost the same but the 'princess' is poor and common, and there was nothing about her relationship with the prince thought you gave a hint at the end. i loved the beginning, it pulled me right into the story, yes it sounds familiar still but you made it look like a different story with few but drastic changes! keep writing!
but there's a mistake here (or maybe confusion?): how did the queen open the door? queens never open the door, lol. and was it at the palace or the royal family's summerhouse?
| struck03 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
have you ever read a story by Levine, Gail? She wrote The Princess Test and this seems a little like it... you should check it out